twilight tiger

Is this a free-verse? If so, it's the best I've read. A nice story being told and exactly the kind of poetry I enjoy reading.

Yea...he was a last minute add on. I didn't really think through his character more until I posted the chapter on here, but I had run out of time to ...

Thank you again :) yay! I got a positive review from flyer! :P Well, I will try to keep my stories from sounding like Twilight...I didn't realize I went that ...

I appreciate you reviews everyone; even your much harsher ones, Flyer :P I don't know what I was thinking...I wrote these all a while ago and don't really remember what ...

This does help, thank you :) I will try to work through the bumpy descriptions. I wrote this a long time ago, so I would have to reread it as ...

thank you :) I edited it and I think it looks better. I appreciate the time you took to edit this.

Thank you :) I edited it and I didn't realize I had so many mistakes! Now it looks alot better, so I appreciate your edits :)

I haven't looked at this in ages, and honestly, I sort of forgot the whole plot I had going for this! So I just sort of dropped it all together. ...

thank you everyone :) and thank you Moriah Leila; you were right...that sounds better. I didn't realize it at the time I wrote it. But hey, taking some time away ...

thank you guys :) I think, now that I'm looking back at everything I've written, that I tend to do better on short sentenced stanzas :P I thank you for ...

You're right. Too many The's. I'm going to change that, thanks for the suggestion ^^ I will also take a look at the number of times I use "storm/storminess" sometimes, ...

thank you. This review just made me want to write more to the story. Hope to see you here again soon